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The Clown and The Aerialist |
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By patterjack
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26 September 2006 |
The Clown and The Aerialist
Anxious , the small child clutches his mother's arm ,
fears that the garish clown has come to harm
speadeagled on the sawdust of the ring
awaiting the laughter his mischance will bring .
The aerialist is flying high above ;
The clown , recovered , mimes a desperate love
while she on the wire above his sad display
dances from pole to pole her delicate way.
And there on his whitened face below his eye
a single tear is painted , to deny
all hope of reaching his desired goal,
appeasement for his lonely , aching soul.
But on a tarot card , there still awaits
the summary to come of both their fates:
she the plucked roses that have fallen on
him in the motley that hides a skeleton. |
The tears of a clown... Written by Talisker (1328 comments posted) 26th September 2006 | Very nice poem Patterjack - enthused with sadness and unrequited love. The circus is a great source of metaphor, the high-flying aerialist as the unattainable dream, the clown as the bitter, sweet 'n' sour caricature of us all. Loved it - as with all your writing. Moved me and enriched my day. Thanks! Oli | thank you Written by patterjack (1328 comments posted) 26th September 2006 | I was trying for something else , but this forced its way out instead I wish I could find the illustration that les at the back of it . patterjack | Written by Phil (6838 comments posted) 26th September 2006 | With Oli on this one. Not much to add. The saddest lines were: a single tear is painted , to deny all hope of reaching his desired goal, All the best, Phil.
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