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LIFE'S BEST LESSON
By JohnnyD
26 September 2006
This is something what each one of us do forget and neglect in our life! Try this 'mantra' and you will see the change for sure!


LIFE'S BEST LESSON

 

Life is beautiful
When it pains the most
Because you learn the best lessons
When it hurts the most
If you can smile in such times
With your radiance
You will overcome the unexpected


Johnny D
 
Life is beautifulWhen it pains the mostBecause you learn the best lessonsWhen it hurts the mostIf you can smile in such timesWith your radianceYou will overcome the unexpected

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Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 26th September 2006
Sorry Johnny, it clearly means well, but for me, too trite.  
 
I usually find swearing loudly when things are a mess helps me the most. 
 
Don't let this discourage you. Others may see this completely differently. Just my personal response. 
 
All the best, 
 
Phil.

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