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LIDWINA - MY FRIEND!
By JohnnyD
26 September 2006
Lidwina is my chat friend from Indonesia, a doctor by profession! I guess how special she is you will know reading the poem...

LIDWINA – MY FRIEND!

If only we can meet one day
How beautiful that day would be
As our friendship grows overseas
With messages and calls
I find as if we have met already
And have been friends for years

Each time your message arrives
I feel so overwhelmed
To know there’s one soul in the world
Who really cares for me for who I am?
I can be myself just for the sake
Knowing well it will never change our friendship

I know, we do feel comfortable
As we share our emotions with each other
The fears, the joy, the pains and love
How wonderful it feels to have one another
Will the world ever believe?
We are separated by the seven seas

As our friendship grows day by day
The sense of caring increases to a new level
I feel so happy when you share your thoughts
I am sure you must be feeling the same
I wonder, do you as to what brought us together
Destiny? Karma or else just pure friendship???

Johnny D
12th September 2006


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Written by Fledermaus (3453 comments posted) 19th February 2008
Nice piece. You're part Indonesian yourself, aren't you? So do you chat with her in Bahasa Indonesia? 
It's one of the strange things of the internet: That people can talk to others they have never seen in their lives before. You are living five time zones away from most of us on this site, yet I can read your poems and comment on them.

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