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Wishfull Thinking
By MonstersBaby
28 September 2006
 
    I wish I could do things
 
 O how I wish I would.
 
 Dangerous things, wild things
 
 Things would make even the Devils heart
 
 Beat a rapid new beat.
 
 
 
 I need to know things
 
 Things I wish I already did.
 
 Manic things, exuberant and important things
 
 Things that would render the suns light
 
 Pale by comparison.
 
 
 
 I wish to see many things
 
 Beautiful things, colourful things
 
 Things more vibrant, more vivid
 
 Then any fantasy could recreate.
 
 
 
 I wished a wish to feel certain things
 
 Amorous things, shy things
 
 Things from the lustful dreams of passionate martyrs
 
 Borne from the jealousy of Cupid himself!
 
 
 
 I wished a wish that day, yesterday and today.
 
 Tomorrow I shall wish again
 
 Wishing one of my wishes would fall on fairy's ears
 
 So that maybe, one day
 
 I could be happy.

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My wish
Written by Suspect-D-Vice (3 comments posted) 28th September 2006
Sorry, but I wish I didn't have to read about your wishes. Light a birthday cake instead. I suggest you read 'William's work. His command of the child-self and uncritical evocation of his obviously interrupted development ensures that his wishes to procreate his intellect are fulfilled. Nice spelling though.

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