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| Desolute and Destitue | |
| By ellie-jelly | ||||
| 30 September 2006 | ||||
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This is a poem I wrote close to a year ago. I wanted to try and write about the environment, more so about how much damage has been done rather than how pretty the flowers are etc.... It seems a little "moody" to me. I'm thinking I want to work on this more. Suggestions welcome. Desolute and Destitue Peek through the glimmer what does it reveal? a world that seems dimmer it doesn't seem to heal. Choking on our life devastation is beyond what is seen never seen so much strife trying to wash it self clean. Go on your way looking back with shaky hands what was once crystal is now clay what we devoured was the land. Regeneration seems impossible too much ignorance and not enough help decay seems much more probable this is the card that's been dealt.
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