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The Polish Connection - Chapter 5
By jean.day
01 October 2006
The Colonel Isherwood who is mentioned in this chapter was the father of Christopher Isherwood, whose books  I'm sure some of you will have read. He wrote the book that Cabaret was based on.

 May 1916

Tuesday morning was much like Monday, except Beth and I didn’t go up the hill with Rebecca. But we spent as much time and effort in washing Peter’s clothes as we had in the whole wash of the previous day. And not being able to hang them out in the sight of the neighbours, I put up a clothes rack in my bedroom, and lit the fire to make it warmer. We are so lucky to have effective fireplaces and each of our rooms, and to have a very pleasantly warm house. And of course having the rented water heaters in the bathroom and another in the cellar made life much easier for me than for many.

I realised that I had been remiss in not inviting Peter to have a bath when he came in last night, and resolved to do that tonight. I would in fact have the bath run by 9 p.m. when I expected him to come up so that he could quickly and easily deal with this while I fixed him a bit of supper.

Beth seemed a bit less worried by being left alone today, and she spent some time playing in the back yard on her own while I was washing. I showed her how to make a daisy chain and she spent a long time picking the early dandelions and buttercups and daisies.

After our usual lunch of soup and bread, I dressed Beth in her new coat (from Rebecca of course) and decided we would take a trip up to the library at the Jubilee Methodist Church on Compstall Road. I was hoping her little legs would carry her all that way as I had no desire to have to carry her myself, if she should tire. I decided we would make several stops en route to give her a chance to rest.

First stop, was at the shoe shop, as she desperately needed decent shoes.  Mr. Fred Harrop was as humble as ever, bowing and scraping and being ever such a gentleman. We found a pair of strong lace up shoes that will do her nicely and she seemed to find them comfortable so wore them from the shop. I told Mr. Harrop to dispose of the old ones as we wouldn’t be needing them again.

Next we stopped at the Cooperative Store on Lower Fold. Again, I met friends and introduced Beth as our new family member. Then on past Ludworth School and the gas works, and with a short break on the bench by the pub at the Windsor Castle, we went on past the Spring Gardens Pub and eventually got to the church.  I knew the minister’s wife, Mrs. Arnfield ran an excellent library and wouldn’t mind me having a look through her encyclopedias. I was very lucky and found exactly what I was looking for and copied it all out and also found a book about Belgium which I asked if I could borrow.

After we left, I thought Beth might enjoy the view of the train station  from the hill and I let her sit on a bench and watch a train arrive, discharge its passengers and puff off again towards New Mills. One day soon I will take her for a ride on the train, perhaps up to the Peak District.

Beth made a splendid trip, and although she was exhausted by the time we returned home, she had not required me to take the part of a pony. But she curled up on the couch in the lounge and immediately fell asleep and was still dozing when Rebecca returned from school.

“How was your day, dear?” I asked her.

“Same as ever,” she replied, “But did you find out anything of interest about the Belgians?” So I showed her my carefully copied notes and we set to work creating our fictional history for Beth and her father.

I remembered my promise about the bath for Peter, and as soon as I heard him open the back door at 9, I whispered to him that he should go and have a bath, that I had the water run and that there was a fresh towel there for him. I also had put out some of my husband’s underwear and socks and another clean shirt which I trusted would not be too large on him to be uncomfortable in the wearing, but I did not feel I could mention this to him, as it would embarrass both of us.

Fifteen minutes later he emerged smelling of soap and with wet shiny hair. I saw him go into Beth’s room, and a minute later heard her gentle laugh and knew he was telling her a story. I was pleased that he was speaking to her in English, and although she had said hardly anything to me so far, I knew she understood quite a lot of the English we spoke to her. But now she was trying out the odd word with him as he read with her in a book.

It was nearly ten when he came down again, and I motioned for him to come into the dining room where I had set out a meal for him. It was only the leftovers from our stew at our meal earlier, but he looked so appreciative. I had even opened a bottle of wine, and asked shyly if he would join me in a drink. I love wine but don’t feel that I can drink it when I am on my own. He agreed, and we both enjoyed the occasion. I must admit that I had greatly looked forward to his presence, and hoped very much that he would continue to be a part of our household, but knew that if he found somewhere more comfortable where he felt safe, that he would choose to take that.

“And did you find work, today?” I asked.

“No, but I did get an indication that something might be available. I went to see Mr. James Law, the manager of Marple Gas, as you suggested. He interviewed me and seemed very interested when I told him I was by professional a scientist. It seems that there is a plan because of the war to involve the gas works in the making of various chemicals such as nitric and sulphuric acid and ammonium nitrate. These of course are used for explosives. I am not sure I want to be involved in the war by making the products that are used to kill my compatriots, but of course I didn’t say that.”

“So will you see him again, to find out if there is such work?”

“He said that Marple was not likely to get involved, but that the larger companies in Stockport were already doing so, and he would make inquiries, and asked me to come back to see him next week, as he would have had an opportunity by then to speak with his fellow engineers and managers.”

“That is hopeful then. I had another thought of somewhere you might try. There is a firm called the Rammy Company at Primrose Mill – which is some distance to walk, but I can show you a short cut over the hills. They originally made fabric, but now the mill is making gas mantles, and I would think that it would be worth giving them a try.”

“If you give me the details, I will see them tomorrow. I must not count on the gas works job, and will take whatever comes to hand.”

“I will write it out and slip a note under the back door, so you can take them when you go off in the morning.”

“I must say goodnight for now, and make my way downstairs in the dark. I thank you most sincerely for the most wonderful evening I have spent in many months,” and again he kissed my hand. But as he did so, he looked into my eyes, and the look I saw there was one of tender care, and not a little bit of male interest. I blushed although the light was too dim for him to make it out I am sure.

Too long delayed, I had to write my promised note to John. I briefly mentioned Beth and how she had come to be with us and then went on to tell him about Joe, and also another local tragedy which had just been mentioned in the paper.

“The news which has been received at Marple, this week, while not official, leaves no ground for hope that Col. Frank Bradshawe Isherwood is alive, but everything points to his having fallen at the battle of Ypres, somewhere about the beginning of May. On Saturday last, it was reported that an identification disc bearing the Colonel's initials, was found.

“Frank Bradshaw - Isherwood was probably the best known of the Marple men fighting in the war. His family have been the most prominent in the area for centuries. They live in the Marple Hall and are also owners of Wybersley Hall.
Mr. Isherwood was a career soldier, and had joined the York & Lancaster Regiment in 1892. He had been through many campaigns with them, notably in South Africa where he was present at the relief of Ladysmith, and fought in actions at Tugela Heights and Pieters Hill, where he was Mentioned in Dispatches. He was a recipient of the Queens Own medals with 7 clasps.

“He embarked, for France, with the 2nd Battalion Yorks & Lancs on 8th September 1914. The battalion were soon involved in the fighting and on 20th February 1915 was again Mentioned in Dispatches, for conspicuous bravery and distinguished service. On 27th Feb. he was promoted to Lt. Col. and on 29th April he took command of the battalion, an honour which was to be unfortunately short lived.

“He was involved in the Battle of Frezenberg. On 2nd May the battalion left Ypres and occupied a new trench line running through Verlorenhoek. During the following week they experienced heavy fighting and suffered many casualties. The 4th battalion's trenches were subjected to a very severe bombardment and were in several places blown in. On the afternoon of the 5th the enemy attacked in great numbers, protected by artillery fire, but, by placing every spare man in the front line, the German assault was repulsed.

“The 6th & 7th passed in comparative quiet and on the evening of the 7th / 8th the battalion was relieved and went back to billets in Ypres where they were re-enforced by a new draft of 487 Officers, N.C.O.'s & men.

“At 11.45 a.m. on the 8th the battalion's supposed rest was shattered when it was ordered to recapture some trenches that had been lost during the night. By 5.00 p.m. they were in position in the support trenches south east of Frezenberg, having been shelled all the way up to the front line. Once in position the full force of the enemy's bombardment was felt and casualties were beginning to mount up.

"Regardless of this the battalion attacked at 8.00 p.m. with no preliminary bombardment or covering fire. The German trenches were reached and a few men even managed to enter them but were immediately bayoneted.

“In this attack every officer but one was killed or wounded and at midnight the battalion was ordered to attack again. This order was stopped when it was realised that only 83 men under the command of a sergeant were left out of approx. 700. Between 23rd April & 8th May the 83rd Brigade had lost 128 Officers & 4379 men.

“Although Frank's body has not been found his I.D. tags were returned to his wife (Mrs. Isherwood) having, apparently, been found on a German who was taken prisoner, who handed it over to the Red Cross authorities.

“Colonel Isherwood was known to most Marple people as a quiet, unassuming, modest country gentleman, whose life was spent in the service of the country, and in the quiet of his home. His military duties never permitted that he should take a very active part in the public life of Marple, but he was often to be seen accompanying his venerable father on his daily visits through the village. The intense anxiety of the public has been to a great extent removed, but it has given place to a profound sorrow. The public mourn the loss of a member of the illustrious family, which has retained its ancient dignity and honour from the earliest time down to the present day, for there is not one in the district but feels a deep and honest reverence and esteem for the family of Isherwood.

“Colonel Frank Bradshawe Isherwood was born 45 years ago, and was the second son of Mr. John Henry Bradshawe Isherwood J. P., of Marple Hall. He was destined for a military career, like his famous ancestor, Col. Henry Bradshawe, who fought in the Cromwellian wars with such distinction. He was educated at Cambridge, where he won distinction, and subsequently he went to the Royal Military College, at Sandhurst. Twenty years ago he obtained a commission in the York and Lancaster Regiment (2nd Battalion), and it is a noteworthy fact that his father held a commission in the same regiment, many years ago. Twelve years ago he married Miss Machell Smith, of Bury St. Edmunds, the niece of Sir Walter Green, of Cranliegh Mansions, London, W., and they took up residence at Wybersley Hall, another ancestral seat of the family.

"Mrs. Isherwood gave up the house in Ireland, and came to Marple, where her two children enjoyed the company of their grandparents. Colonel Isherwood has played a great part in the war.  When the news was made known in Marple, on Sunday last, the flag at All Saints was hoisted at half mast, as was also the one on the Conservative Club.”

Reviews
Very moving...
Written by Clifftown (619 comments posted) 2nd October 2006
...the article left me close to tears at the end. I don't think the articles are too much at all; they are needed to give the reader a real sense of what is going on during this time and what everyone is going through. 
 
I also really like the character development of Peter and Barbara and how they are becoming closer. 
 
Looking forward, as ever, to more.
Thanks again Clifftown
Written by jean.day (2196 comments posted) 2nd October 2006
It is so nice to know that you are reading this story and enjoying it. I am restarting my creative writing course at the University on Wednesday and the class will be reviewing my first chapter of this book for their homework. Since it is a group all of whom are writing books, we all give each other very detailed critiques, which are very useful, and often kind of hard to take.
Hi Jean
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3136 comments posted) 6th October 2006
Hi I'm just playing catch-up with this story and enjoying it hugely. I'm impressed by the wonderful characterisations and descriptions but mostly by how prolific you are.I wish I could write as fast and as well. I can hardly keep up. 
I'll comment further when I've caught up a bit more 
But I just wanted to say how much i like it 
cheers 
BBS

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 10th May 2007
She should hurry writing John. One after the other of his fellow villagers seems to be slain... :-/

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