READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 1370 guests online and 6 members online
Play Room
The Viewing
By patterjack
02 October 2006
Mrs Day and Helen come to an agreement , and Helen has begun to forge a relationship with the Village And my grateful thanks to the real life Mrs Day for her help .

The Viewing

-- Ah , Mrs Day, said Helen as they re- entered the kitchen , where there were a great many photographs in bundles , laid out face down upon the table .

-- Do sit down here , where you can reach these.

Mrs Day was itching to reach out an turn some of them over , but she stayed her hand as Helen spoke.

-- As you can see , a lot of these photographs have either a name or some initials pencilled on the back , not all of them entirely legible. What I've done is bundle together all those that either have the names clearly written on them , or that can be seen to be of the same person , or ones I think are of the same person, though I may be wrong in a lot of cases .

Mrs Day nodded her understanding .

-- There are also quite a few group photos , where some of the individuals are not known or named . And there are quite a few where even single subjects are not named . And next to some of the bundles you can see that I have a few smaller bundles with a rubber band round them . If you please , would you leave the ones with the rubber bands around them till the very last ? There are special reasons as you'll see .

Mrs Day looked over the bundles and saw that there were indeed a few piles with banded photos beside them .

-- Now , Mrs Day , I don't want you to think that I'm laying down impossible rules . Please understand I'm trying to go about this in as logical a way as I can . I would think that you'd be more interested in photos of people than in photos of scenery and places ?

-- Oh yes, said Mrs Day

-- Well there are quite a lot of those landscape ones , and after you've seen the photos of the personalities , I'd be very grateful if you'd identify some of those for me if you would . It might take a lot of time , so we can leave that till much later.

Mrs Day , anxious to get to the business of seeing the photos that were important to her, willingly agreed to that request .

-- Well then , here's a soft lead pencil . If you will , please write the names of those that you know on the back of the photo . Then I will be able to ensure that I can get them to the subjects themselves . There are many with multiple copies , by the way . I haven't bothered to put out all the ones that we could see were exact duplicates .

Mrs Day took up the pencil , and Peter slid the furthest bundle across the table to her . She turned it over and looked carefully, then shook her head .

-- No . I don't recognise her . Maybe she was one of the girls he used to have visit him from London I think it was. Sometimes as many as three or four at a time .

Peter turned to look out of the window , as the thought crossed his mind that the young Lord had indeed lived it up .

The next couple of bundles received much the same judgment from Mrs Day , so Peter , almost like a croupier , swept up those bundles as well as the rubber banded bundles that accompanied them , and replaced them in the box.

After carefully writing some names on several innocuous photos , Mrs Day turned up a large bundle .

-- Now that's Jessie , cried Mrs Day . She was older than me and my friends , but I'd know her anywhere . She left the village in 1960 , the year the Lady disappeared. Went up North to marry someone from - -- oh , I forget the place.

-- Older than the Lord too ?

-- Oh yes . And so was this one . She's Lizzie , Jessie's friend . She left the village about the same time .

-- Interesting , said Helen.

-- It looks as if he did have some order in the arrangements in the boxes , then.

-- Oh my goodness , she cried as she turned over the second last bundle.

-- That's Doris .

-- We thought so , said Helen . Then she pushed the last bundle to Mrs Day.

-- And I think these must be photos of you .

Mrs Day blanched .

-- And are those in the bundles what I think they are ?

-- I'm afraid so . If these had been seen by anyone in authority during his lifetime , he would probably have been in serious trouble . You girls were all very young .

-- But I don't understand . I assure you I never ......

-- I am sure that you didn't , said Helen soothingly.

-- At least the photographs of you look like candid shots taken entirely without your knowledge . Just think back . There's a little stream up there past the small woods. Nobody would think twice about it nowadays , but did you and your friends , er -- how can I put it ? we called it skinny dipping where I come from .

-- Oh dear oh dear , said Mrs Day , with a catch in her throat.

-- He couldn't have -- he wouldn't have , surely .....

-- I'm afraid he did . Those woods offer perfect cover for a man with a telescopic lens .

-- Oh my god , how he must have laughed behind our backs ! He used to call us his dryads , but I never knew what he meant by that.

-- He had the advantage of a classical education , said Peter , sotto voce .

-- Whatever is going to happen with these ? asked Mrs Day anxiously.

-- Nothing . Not a thing , said Helen.

-- They are of no use to me. You may have yours to take with you when you go . But we still have the problem of Doris , and the other ladies there in the special bundles . Do you have any suggestions ?

-- I think that it would be best to let Peter return the photos to Doris , said Mrs Day .

-- He could just drop it in to the Post Office as a parcel for her and leave before she opens it .

Helen looked at Peter , who shrugged a reluctant kind of assent.

-- After all , I'm the dogsbody , and it will save Helen a confrontation , he thought .

-- I think that I'd better go back now . The shop , you know . And thank you for your consideration of my feelings .

Helen smiled and rose .

-- You're very welcome . I'm glad that everything about me and the manor is clear now . Well , everything but that damned skeleton . I suppose that I 'll have half the county tramping around here now . But , c'est la vie .

And she led Mrs Day to the door while Peter repacked the photos in their boxes.

Reviews

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!

 Previous item   Next item