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| can't think of a title yet-revisited. | |
| By francoise | ||||||||
| 02 October 2006 | ||||||||
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This is the same poem i posted yesterday, with some changes. Does it sound better? However much your feelings soar, Stall them. Try to feed them with friendship instead Or lay them down in wreaths of sense. Don’t intertwine them with anything sensual Don’t let them fall only to end up crawling So deep, So enticing, Towards an endless summer slumber. However much your feelings roam Stall them. Take them out into open pastures Of whimsical conversation and laughter. Give them only the firmness of your grounding. The strong oaky turn of your presence. Simply wipe the sweat of passion from your brow And tell them Don’t compete with loves breed.
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