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By Evangeline
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22 May 2005 |
A little something for a friend who keeps everything inside. Your heart bleeds
It forms a pool
Cup your hands
It isn't blood, it is tears
Open your hands
And,drain away the fears
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concise and incisive
Written by kevinrobson73 (371 comments posted) 17th December 2005 | worthy of a longer work
perhaps some back story incident related |
Written by B.D. (82 comments posted) 1st June 2006 | | I think it was meant to leave the reader sort of hanging because it can be applied to more people when it's left kinda vague, I think. I like it as is but I would also be interested in a longer piece. Great work! |
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