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| You Should Not Be What I Want | |
| By gutterkitty | ||||||||||||||||
| 03 October 2006 | ||||||||||||||||
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This was written on the subject of forbidden love (excuse the cliché!). I have been a fan of ancient Greek mythology since childhood, and the girl in the piece happened to share the name of my favourite goddess, Artemis, or Diana. Tell me if you think the idea works. You should not be what I want. You whom I chose, my favourite of the gods, as folds of white linen, I breathed in your scent from the pages of a book, and fell in love. I did not know that I would meet you, You were meant to stay hidden in the temple of my mind. But there you were on the playground one day, and I tried to shout, "You should not be what I want!" but your hair caught in my mouth, and buried me in your scent. and all I could think of was laying a rose, and gifts in brown paper at your altar. Diana, I do not want to worship your marble skin, as you kiss my cheek. My love is promised to another, one of flesh, who is warm to me. Goddesses should not shine so brightly in the corner of the eye. They should be taught to be ugly, and locked behind pillars. I will burn your altar down and pray the smoke does not carry your perfume. I should not be kissing marble. My back should not be sore from bowing when you pass by, trying to read the myths in the footprints you do not leave. You are too pretty to; your head is in the stars.
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