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| By gutterkitty | ||||||||||
| 03 October 2006 | ||||||||||
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As one of four siblings I am used to a busy home and I sometimes miss that big family feeling, now that I am living in an empty house. I'm not sure if the mixed metaphors and short lines work but I like it all the same. The room is empty. He came while I was still at school, Packed up his bony hugs and Curly-at-the-edges smile. I used to be one of four, A litter that would fight over my mother's pancakes At Sunday lunch. We'd bicker like new, wrinkled chicks, And guard our rooms like Lipsticked, clothe-borrowing Naked photographed Dogs. There was never enough food or money or time For all of us, And we all wished we were an only child. Now my brother has left, Tripping over his bony hugs and Weighed heavy under curly smiles, He forgot to say goodbye.
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