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| Tainted Blood | |
| By rilLie | ||||||
| 05 October 2006 | ||||||
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we were discussing a new topic for social studies today, the second world war. our teacher started it with the classic: "close your eyes and imagine this" style. this was what I saw. "Mother, mother," was his cry forever in my mind his hand goes up to snatch the air in a pool of blood, I'm blind. He was a soldier, in this war this bloody, war I hate. So much destruction, so many deaths so many the fire just ate. His hand goes down his final breath was done his blood was tainted on my skin forevermore ungone. The world just crashed to the ground my eyes just stare at space my senses numb, my brain abuzz it seemed the last of days. I'll never forget his final words eternally in my heart his voice always in my head it hit me like a dart. It was too much a tear just fell down my cheek my cheeks were red, by what he said "O lord, peace I seek."
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