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Dawn
By Ostara
23 May 2005
I wrote this on impulse a short while ago. I am not sure if it means anything...

Wandering into the night

To know the truth

That lies, covered by shadows

Hidden from day.

So no-one can see; who wants to see

How she comes to light her way,

When we would rather be cloaked

From all who might do us harm.

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Mystery
Written by Sweetheart (14 comments posted) 1st October 2005
If you are not sure it means anything, I guess it was just randon thoughts in your head, but it has a nice ring to it - but mysterious - likes thoughts rolling round your head. I liked the bit 'the truth, that lies, covered by shadows hidden from day - I think this sums up life -we dont really know what is going to happen or where the truth will be found!!
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Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 1st December 2006
It's pretty. I'm a fan of introspection and as such this appeals to me. "Wandering into the night" is my favourite line, helpless-sounding, but at the same time purposeful...or perhaps that's just me =) 
 

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