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eeeeeeeuuuuuuuuaaaaaargh I don't like and there's something seriously wrong, criticism welcome *welcome mat* What is it? What are these shadowed eyes, painted lips and aching thoughts? How did these rat-tails come about, why this low ache in the abdomen? Who decided on pallid skin and chipped nails, calloused heels and black-out pores? Which artist concluded these eyes were too big, and shrunk them to fit [like a foot in a glove]?. Why does my mass distribute like that, an unfinished pear-shape, impatient for growth? Why do these question congeal in my head? I have nothing to say, it's already been said.
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