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By dougle
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23 May 2005 |
what do you think? I remember the time by the river in the summers haze,
I remember how your hair shone brighter than the sun,
I remember the pure white lily in your hair,
I remember as you lay in the crook of my arm,
In the dappled shade beneath the Willow.
I remember the smile which graced your face,
As you drifted into peaceful sleep soothed by the sounds of the river.
I remember how the willow wept, for soon the dream would end. |
Written by Weaver (4 comments posted) 28th May 2005 | Enjoyable, wistful nugget. Can't decide whether or not you used 'I remember' too often. Maybe the repetition is an important part but I can't help thinking it nonetheless
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