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By dougle
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23 May 2005 |
unrequited and unspoken love.
what do you think? She will never know how beautiful,
She is to me,
How beautiful she is,
She will never see.
And if beauty is in the eye of the beholder,
Then I would hold her in my eyes,
Hold her there if nowhere else.
And so I hold her for none to see,
By me heart, within my secret self,
Where none know me. |
Form?
Written by twriter (117 comments posted) 13th December 2005 | | Is this meant to be a poem? I really like the language you use and the textural quality that you create within this piece but some formatting might help to tell the reader what they're reading. |
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