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| MRS VICTORIA MUSTAPHA AND FRIENDS, I TOO COULD USE A HAND | |
| By Witzl | ||||||||||||
| 07 October 2006 | ||||||||||||
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I wrote this partly for fun after receiving an endless stream of dubious e-mail 'charity' appeals when I have been hoping for acceptances or even 'We liked your work, but...' responses. Still, I am hoping for honest criticism from readers. Does this sound stupid to you? Like I'm copying somebody else? Does it fail to charm or amuse? If so, please tell me. What I do not want -- and most likely don't deserve -- is fawning praise. If you really hate it or think it could be improved, I would like to hear your opinions. I may not pay them the least bit of mind, but I would like them all the same. MRS VICTORIA MUSTAPHA AND FRIENDS, I TOO COULD USE A HAND As pebbles find their way into my shoes And errant thoughts will wander through my head so too do all these wild appeals these desperate and sad attempts to garner trust and wherewithal find their own way – blind and confused – into my e-mail in-box. Dearly esteemed they call me – (And oh, would that I were!) They spin afresh their painful tales of woe of jealous rivals, life’s vicissitudes, calamities and misery befallen. Hard times and fiendish relatives, double-crossing friends, dishonest politicians have cruelly done them in and claimed their toll. Rich treasures now lay hidden just waiting to be claimed. Nerve and spirit, steadfast Christian strength are needed to recover them. The dispossessed can but wait and hope! Know this, my lost, beseeching friends: I too am stranded and have strayed and been betrayed and long for treasure that is rightfully mine; I too wait hopefully, pathetically, for mail to come -- For checks and acclamation for praise and compliments and homage long past-due
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