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Season's Change/Autumn's tears
By dougle
23 May 2005
what do you think?

Beneath winter’s bare branch We stand in the shadow of leaves In the light of their golden hues, Though we may not see their shadows thrown We stand in their play of light and dark Watching their sad fall, autumn’s tears, She gives way to cold winter’s sway In a blaze of colour and rustling whirlwinds of leaves That follow the setting of summer, Until the rise of spring When blue bells ring.

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Written by no1butClo (341 comments posted) 6th February 2006
this is beautiful, it reminds me of the myth, haedes and persphone, gorgeous imagery here 
 
well done :)

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