Great Writing - Home > Poetry > On Walking Through a Spider's Web
READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 1321 guests online and 3 members online
Poetry
On Walking Through a Spider's Web
By Talisker
09 October 2006
Guilt!

Oh fabulous! Go right ahead!

Six hours of toil, gone in a second.

Ripped and ruined, every thread,

For such a fool I never reckoned!

 

Half a night, to what avail?

Spin and fix, spin and fasten,

You come reeling,  full of ale!

In solemn dark, the web assassin!

 

Go on then, wipe it from your hair!

All the fruit of my hard labour.

Could I but such a giant ensnare,

How I’d repay your ample favour!

 

Are you blind, or simply daft,

To walk thus through another’s dwelling?

All my skill, my art, my craft,

Towards the frosty ground propelling!

 

Had it been but a basic web,

A simple net between the palings,

I might forgive your clumsy step,

Have understood your human failings!

 

But this was quite the most complex,

Intricate, fancy,  labyrinthine,

Of all my spidery life projects,

This one I’d say “I’m proud its mine”!

 

My God, had I a wrecking ball!

The stature and the chance to use it!

That thing you call a house would fall!

To rubble I would fast reduce it!

 

But I must simply start anew,

While you lie there in stupefaction,

Mere man was never equal to,

A spider, not in wit nor action!

 

Oli (09/10/06)

Reviews

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3433 comments posted) 9th October 2006
A great bit of Arachnid angst, well it makes a nice change from the human variety I don't know if it was meant to but it made me smile which is a first for the poetry forum 
Nice work 
BBS
To the web assassin:
Written by Phil (6828 comments posted) 9th October 2006
How could you?  
 
Made me smile too. It also reminded me of my trips walking to primary school on damp autumn mornings. We often walked through silk threads spun from privet hedges. Never saw them, just felt them across the face. 
 
Enjoyed this very much. I particularly liked the third last verse. 
 
All the best, 
 
Phil.

Written by LynB (435 comments posted) 9th October 2006
I loved this - I hate walking into spiders' webs - because on one occasion there was a very large spider still in it! 
 
I liked the way you wrote it from the spider's point of view! :grin

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 25th November 2006
Just found this on my 'Work Awaiting Review' bar.  
 
How did I miss this before, I wonder? I love it -- like Lyn, I enjoy getting a spider's point of view. Take that, Robert Burns and your 'To a Mouse!'

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!

 Previous item   Next item