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The Polish Connection - Chapter 14
By jean.day
10 October 2006
February 1916

How wonderful it was to hear from Peter and to know he was safe, and also to have the added bonus of getting a letter from his friend, who had such a way with words. I sat down and wrote back to each of them, telling them the little details about our lives. I told them about the latest letter I had just had from John. I also wanted to know what had happened to Peter between the time he left my house and when he arrived in the Isle of Man.

I didn’t hear from Peter and Paul each week, as I expect the idea of four letters a week from the two of them was more than the censors could cope with, but I heard at least once every other week.

"Dear Barbara,

You asked about my life between leaving your house and getting here. Well, I was en route to work early one morning in mid November, and I was stopped by a policeman at the top of the road. He said there had been a report of a strange man in the area, and they were checking each person who went down towards Mill Brow.
 
Of course, it was soon discovered that I was not pure English, my accent gave me away if nothing else. I told them I was on my own, living rough, and didn’t mention my work or your house or Beth. I don’t think they believed me, but they were only interested in taking me to the station. There after close questioning, I had to admit that I came from Germany, and that was all they needed to send me here.

First I went to a place in Liverpool where all the new internees were gathered until a sufficient number justified a boat load across. It was on the boat across that I met Paul. He had been kept in the London area, a place called Stratford for the first part of his internment. We became good friends from the start and will no doubt stay that way.

Love
Peter”

And then came his second letter of the week.

“Dear Barbara,

You asked about how our camp is organised. There are four sub-camps, each ruled by a sub-commandant. Each of these camps was divided into five to seven “compounds” containing nearly a thousand men each when full. Each compound is wired off from its neighbours, and only a few men with special duties can pass from one compound to another. The inhabitants of each compound are subdivided again into companies, each under its own leader. Constant head-counts are made to ensure against escapes. On the upper slopes of the hill attached to Camp III., are the hospital huts, including special wards for venereal, tubercular, and for mental cases. On the other side of the camp, across the main road, lays a little piece of ground which is known as “Camp V,” the burying ground of the little church at Knockaloe.

Since you asked, I don’t know how much money I would need to buy my way into the Douglas Camp. I will see if I can find out and let you know. But I feel dreadful at the thought of letting you spend your money on my welfare. I know you say that it is for the benefit of Beth’s father, and it is important to her that I have a better life. Anyway, I will find out and we can then see what happens.

Love

Peter"

And my letter from Paul:

"Dear Barbara,

Perhaps I can tell you about my first day here. I felt that I was not a human being called by a name but an interned civilian numbered nineteen thousand and something, as shown by a metal disc to be delivered in camp. We were marching through the town, the inhabitants, thank God, showing no interest whatever in what had long become a daily sight to them. I don't know what they looked like, it was too dark to see them.

Some of the men began to sing, which is, I suppose, unavoidable when people are marching: the soldierly spirit. But their choice irritated me - an old German song of soldiers leaving their town and their sweethearts in order to march to battle and heroic deeds, really a most inappropriate choice for the occasion. So I asserted my individual freedom by not joining in the singing.

The chains of light came nearer and nearer, the mirage faded. Barbed wire appeared, long, endlessly long stretches of barbed wire, five or six yards high. And faces and more faces behind the wire, thousands of caged animals. I was very, very weary. At last a gate opened in the barbed wire wall, we entered sinking deep into slippery clay. In front of us lay, on the left, free space, on the right, tightly-clustered wooden huts, the whole surrounded by tall barbed wire and arc-lamps This was called a compound; it held one thousand human animals. Five compounds formed a camp, and this was Camp II. There are five camps altogether, I believe. The gate closed behind us.

I am curious as to your American origins and how you met John.

Best regards,
Paul"

And before the end of the week, I heard from them again.

"Dear Barbara, Rebecca and Beth,

You asked what the camp looks like and how we spend our days. My first impression on seeing Knockaloe Camp by day was one of delighted surprise with radiant sunshine, marvellously pure and bracing air, and a panorama of turf-clad hills.

There are a dozen or more long, low wooden huts, each of which houses about fifty men. Our huts contain a long table and a heap of pallets piled up in a corner. When we arrived, the wash-house was as yet unbuilt; so far there were only buckets which could be put on the ground somewhere after having been filled at the pump. I had to borrow a towel. I found washing in the outside air rather pleasant, though it took an acrobat to keep an already washed foot clean while washing the other.

When we first arrived we were formed into a square to await the visit of the Commandant, overlord of all prisoners of all Knockaloe, who was coming to receive us into his realm. We waited what seemed a long time and then the great man appeared at last.

He was or looked very old, rather peevish and at the same time rather shy. I believe he felt uncomfortable. All sorts of old colonels have been dug out of their retirement, and probably they have not chosen the most eminent soldiers for jobs of this sort. This old man certainly is what one must - for want of a better or more intelligible term - describe as a gentleman, that is why he does not care for his job and does not enjoy this particular show. Also, he has to repeat the performance every other day, when a new lot of one thousand stare at him with hostility, fear, anger, or amusement, according to temperament, or more likely with a mixture of all these feelings. He said if we followed the rules, he would be fair with us. If we tried to escape we would be shot.

Love from Peter”

“Dear Barbara,

We are so pleased to get your letters and to know you are enjoying the ones from us. It gives a pattern to our week – writing and reading your letters, which makes life much more pleasant.

Now for more about our first days here. Peter and I were telling you about the commandant’s first speech. He pointed vaguely to the hills and said in a raised voice: ‘The latrines will be finished soon [pause] I hope.’ And that was all, but his hope did not materialize for many days, and then it materialized in the opposite direction to the one he had indicated. Meantime there were buckets and plain air and though it may sound absurd this was felt as extremely humiliating and disgusting by most. In fact, one could not get used to it ever (even a good many animals seek privacy on these occasions.)

After the Commandant had had his say a German interpreter repeated his words. He was far more impressive: a soldier born. He shouted at the top of his voice: ‘Der Herr Kommandant hat gesagt, etc.’ And that ended the ceremony.

There is a sort of shanty called a canteen, standing just outside the wire, with its counter open to the camp, where we could try to buy something. Hundreds were waiting already. I waited for about two hours and everything had been sold out when my turn came. You asked what you might send us. Simple things like soap and toothbrushes and toothpaste would be very welcome. Handkerchiefs too, and perhaps gloves and socks. I know Peter feels awkward being obliged to you, but I will tell you freely that we would be most appreciative of anything and everything you might send.

Regards

Paul”

So having shared these letters with Rebecca and Beth, we set out the next day to make a parcel for Peter and Paul, and collected all the things they asked for and a few besides. I put in a copy of the book, The Thirty Nine Steps by John Buchan, which had been recently published and had rave reviews. It seemed a man’s book to me and I hoped they would enjoy it. Peter perhaps could not read English, but it would be a good book for Paul to use to teach him. We made some brownies, an American favourite food the recipe for which I had brought with me when I moved to England, and I hoped Peter and Paul would enjoy them as much as Rebecca and Beth did.

Paul had asked about how I came to meet John. It all seems so long ago now. I was born in Independence, Wisconsin, my parents having emigrated from Poland in 1860, that same part where Peter comes from, where the Germans are now in control. I was the youngest child and somewhat of a surprise to them, I think. 

I had a good upbringing and proved to be rather clever, so they agreed to me going to Northwestern University at Evanston, Illinois, near Chicago, when I was eighteen, to study history and music, as I am quite accomplished on the piano and organ. There were many Kuligs who were relatives of ours who now live in Chicago. Also, Peter’s aunt Anna lived there, but of course I knew nothing of him at that time.

The same week I arrived there, I met John who had come there for a year’s research in science. He had been attracted by the Dearbourne Observatory which was on the campus, and the Professor of Astronomy lived there, and John wanted to meet him. John actually worked for Professor Ulysses S. Grant, who was a biologist originally, and latterly a geologist. His specialty was working with iron, lead, zinc and copper, and those were the same minerals that particularly interested John. He was part of the McCormick School of Engineering and Applied Science.

We immediately fell in love and my parents approved of him, so I dropped my studies and before he left to go back to England, we were married at the church in my home town. We then came to England where I was introduced to his family in Worcester, and then we moved to Manchester, where he had secured a job at Manchester University.

We lived in rented accommodation in Marple for the first few years and of course Rebecca was born there. Then in 1912 we moved to our present house in Mellor, which was built in 1909. I missed my home very much for the first year, but John’s family in Worcester were very supportive to me.

I certainly appreciate the much milder climate of England having withstood huge temperature changes in Wisconsin – from being in the 100s in the summer to the minus 40s in the winter with feet of permanent snow from October onwards. I, of course, have letters from my family in America, although very infrequently now the war is on, and I hope one day to be able to go back and visit again, but I now feel myself to be truly English.

We had bad news, although not totally unexpected this week. Father Cornellius McSweeney, who has been our priest for thirty five years, died on the 22nd. His body will be taken back to Ireland for burial in a week or so. I don’t think they have appointed a new priest yet but I am sure that the priest from New Mills, Father McKenna, will try to at least have one mass on Sundays here until it is all settled.

Our weather has been unseasonably cold with heavy snow. Yesterday Rebecca bundled up warmly and fought her way through the snow up the hill, but when she got there, she was only one of thirteen children out of the 74 children who was there on time. They waited until 9.30 but the numbers had only gone up to 20, so they sent all the children home for the day.

I do hope being in that snow won’t have weakened her resistance. There is a lot of whopping cough going around, and several of her classmates have it.

Reviews
Great as usual...
Written by Clifftown (642 comments posted) 10th October 2006
It was really nice to catch up with this story after a long weekend. I find the letters fascinating - they're so well written and informative. Are these also extracts from real letters? 
 
I can't wait for events to unfold!
Thanks Clifftown
Written by jean.day (2366 comments posted) 10th October 2006
I'm glad you are enjoying the letters from Peter and Paul as I think they are wonderful. T 
 
They are taken from a chapter of a book - so they weren't in letter form originally, but the man Paul Cohn-Portheim, wrote up his memoirs of his experience in the camp in about 1932, at which time he was living in Canada. But a chapter from his book is on the internet under the section on the internees, so all the content of the letters is authentic except for any references to Barbara, who is of course ficticious, as is Peter. 
 
The John letters are real, but they come from a much later time, but I did research on the internet to find out that the British did have a presence in Cyprus during the First World War, probably to keep the Turks from taking it over.
Hi Jean!
Written by LynB (435 comments posted) 10th October 2006
Another fantastic chapter! This story really draws you in, and I love the way you are using letters to tell parts of it. I always love your attention to detail, it makes the story come alive! 
 
Looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work, Jean - loving it! :)
Thanks Lyn
Written by jean.day (2366 comments posted) 10th October 2006
I am pleased that you are enjoying the book. I think it must be your turn again.

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3566 comments posted) 10th October 2006
Well, jean I've just about caught up. i must say you seem to be able to write faster than I can read!! 
I feel so involved with the characters and their trials. The device of using letters makes it all so personal and gives such empathy for those involved. 
I think this is one aspect of the war that is often overlooked, we think of it as a time of great spirit and pulling together but there must also have been a lot of fear and paranoia as well.  
A powerful and understated piece of writing 
cheers 
BBS
Hi BBS
Written by jean.day (2366 comments posted) 10th October 2006
I'm always pleased to get a review from you and am happy that you are enjoying this story.  
 
One of the interesting knock-on effects of writing historically based work, is that you get listed in google in prominent places. Suddenly my work has gone from having 12 readers to 32 - and my guess is that many of them are people who googled Knockaloe.

Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 18th November 2008
Hi Jean. 
 
Enjoyed this. As mentioned above - using letters does bring the characters alive and give this a more personal touch. 
 
Phil
Thanks Phil
Written by jean.day (2366 comments posted) 19th November 2008
Since Paul, whose work i have borrowed is long since dead, I felt maybe I could do something to make up for using his work - so I bought 2 of his books that were available on line. He wrote about 6 books altogether, but the ones I bought - on England and London, specificially, were well written but nearly as interesting to me as the stuff he wrote about his time in the internment camps. The original of this book (I am only using a few chapters) is very expensive to buy, so I didn't.

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