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By JohnnyD
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10 October 2006 |
Please do give me feedbacks honestly. You all are making me into a better writer with your valuable feedbacks... as I am learning so many things from you all, thanks! POETRY
Bottled up emotions Ready to erupt like a volcano Finds a way From pen to paper As words weave magic To hold the emotions in unison
Life’s experiences Rich in emotions Colourful and hot like the lava Ready to explode Takes shape into a new creation They all call it ‘Poetry’
Each line interprets Multiple emotions of life To add splendour and bewilderment Giving a new dimension To poet’s narration As emotions unfold into words
To a poet It may be pain While for readers It may seem like a beauty Interpretation of each word Speaks of undefined mystery
The beautiful creation From poet’s point of view
Is as difficult to shape As it is to interpret Once shaped and created It becomes poetry!
Johnny D 9th October 2006 |
Written by Talisker (1331 comments posted) 10th October 2006 |     | Pardon?
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 10th October 2006 | What was that again, Oli? I didn't catch it...
Slan! | Personal conversation is not a review!
Written by JohnnyD (106 comments posted) 10th October 2006 | Dear Gerardconnolly, HI!
I would really appreciate if you will be kind enough to keep your personal conversation with Oli (Talisker) through PM. I guess no one really taught you that PERSONAL CONVERSATION IS NOT A REVIEW! Well, I am sure you are intelligent enough to understand what I want to say and request. Take care!
Johnny D | Slan a ma fone...!
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 10th October 2006 | How often do I have to repeat myself. Can't you read English? Its bad enough you can't write it?
I couldn't give a tinker's cuss what you think. Your writing is about as skillful as an incontinent elephant and you deserve every lampoon you get. I shall do exactly what I like whether you like it or not. This is an open website. If you don't like the heat get out of the kitchen. | um...
Written by kerry1983 (9 comments posted) 11th October 2006 | I'm new here, so far I've been welcomed with open arms.
The few reviews I've had (one was to tell me I posted in the wrong place) have been constructive and kind.
I personally feel that this kind of poetry, one line then reverse the wording of the line before.... I don't get it.
I'm not a poetry expert but I always thought rythmn and different words stringed together to construe an idea/feeling/description is what poetry is about.
I feel your poetry are more 'recipes'.
I hope you are not offended or disgruntled by my views, I'm only one person.
Thanks
Kez x | THE UNEDUCATED PERSON OF THE SITE!
Written by JohnnyD (106 comments posted) 15th October 2006 | Dear Oli / Gerard, HI!
You have proved to one and all that you are the most uneduacted person on this site! You may think that you are a good writer but honestly, by your reviews you show how awfully you have been brought up by your parents and teachers (if at all you went to school, which we all doubt).
I am not at all angry with your reviews, oops comments. In fact, I pity you as a human being. It surely reflects in your personality that you have had a very bad upbringing and there is an angst within. While noone taught you how to be a good human being, I would blame you too for not trying from your end to be one!
Learn while you have a life or else in your deathbed you will be cursing yourself for the miserable life you have led and will ask forgiveness, which would be too late to enjoy such a beautiful life!
Learn to correct yourself rather than trashing people. That is what education is all about! The choice is yours, of course!
Take care!
Johnny D | Pay attention, I will not say it again
Written by nascent (106 comments posted) 15th October 2006 | Comments that attack people personally, NO MATTER UNDER WHAT CIRCUMSTANCES, do not belong in these forums and will result in membership being suspended.
nascent | Is it poetry?
Written by Marybarry (237 comments posted) 31st January 2007 | Greetings nascent,
I am afraid you are wrong. BOTH these men are VERY good writers, BUT
Their manners or lack of is a problem. I spoke to
Talisker and since then he is giving me constructive reviews.
Connolly on the other hand is another kettle of fish.
Generally poets on this site think that my poems are rubbish, with the result of my giving up writing for now.
Many of them are arrogant'
marybarry |
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