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Let's kick our shoes off
By Rayneonme
11 October 2006
Just a little poem about rainy days and romance.  Please tell me what you think.

LET'S KICK OUR SHOES OFF

Let’s take a walk.
Let’s share the blame
Let’s kick our shoes off
In the rain.

Let’s scatter the ashes
Let’s play the part
Let’s avoid
The heart to heart.

Let’s take a breath
Let’s bare the shame
Let’s stroke away
Each other’s pain.

Let’s get close
Let’s make a start
Let’s hold each other
In the dark.

Let’s seek solace
Let’s drift away
Let’s never make
Each other pay.

Let’s make love
Let’s kiss, Let’s flirt
Lets rub our faces
In the dirt.

Let’s hold our tongues
Let’s fan the flame
Let’s open ourselves
Again and again.

Let’s make a promise
Let’s come again
Let’s kick our shoes off
In the rain.

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