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Confusion Rayne's
By Rayneonme
11 October 2006
Hi all.  This is a poem I wrote when I first started dating again after having my little black heart broken.  Please tell me what you think.  Cheers!

Confusion Rayne's

Think I’m falling.
Can’t say no.
Don’t want to fuck
And for him to go.

Want it simple.
Want it free.
Want for him
To belong to me.

Want to have fun.
Don’t know if we can.
Don’t think I want
Another man.

Think he’ll hurt me?
Think I’ll break?
Don’t really want
My heart to ache.

I want it real.
Don’t want it fake.
Don’t want my body
To shudder and shake.

Forgot this feeling,
The warmth of love.
Must crush it down.
Must kill the dove.

Must not feel.
Must not wake.
Must drown it deep
Beneath the lake.

Can’t bare to think
He’ll cause me pain.
Won’t let myself
Get hurt again.

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