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| By Rayneonme | ||
| 11 October 2006 | ||
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Hi all. This is a poem I wrote when I first started dating again after having my little black heart broken. Please tell me what you think. Cheers! Confusion Rayne's Think I’m falling. Can’t say no. Don’t want to fuck And for him to go. Want it simple. Want it free. Want for him To belong to me. Want to have fun. Don’t know if we can. Don’t think I want Another man. Think he’ll hurt me? Think I’ll break? Don’t really want My heart to ache. I want it real. Don’t want it fake. Don’t want my body To shudder and shake. Forgot this feeling, The warmth of love. Must crush it down. Must kill the dove. Must not feel. Must not wake. Must drown it deep Beneath the lake. Can’t bare to think He’ll cause me pain. Won’t let myself Get hurt again.
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