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| Fallen Hope -- The First of a Trilogy | |
| By rilLie | ||||||||||
| 11 October 2006 | ||||||||||
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as usual.. done during science class when sir was ranting on and on about the importance of the trees in the La Mesa Dam. we had a field trip yesterday on the place and it was amazing! anyway.. there's a housing project threatening the water supply of six million or so people in metro manila and this would be a trilogy. enjoy! and as someone famously requested me to do, i'm writing in this in normal, black text. enjoy! The triumph of the century is really coming near, a home and a lawn for my homeless fam'ly dear for finally getting land, however late 'tis victory working on since 1968. I am Genaro Bautista, a humble man of peace, I aim to get my family fin'ly a home to see. La Mesa Dam -- magic words I never may forget 58 hectares of vast land I will get. 38 years in the making, simple, sweet pain. I may finally have and shall gain a home, a garden, or maybe, even a spa for my kids, their papa and their mama. Alas, O joy was never meant to be suffering and pain, just simply thrown to me they say they can not give the holy promised land and here I thought my victory was safely just at hand. Would they ever see, would they ever care of the families littered here and there? We dream of clean, happy, stable shelter where our kids could be kids safely with one another. Would life and love and safety ever be restored? 'Coz my heart just weeps and groans ever just like before. Would suffering and poverty forever rule the land? Would happiness forever be deprived from all man?
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