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West Cork Brigade
By MarjoryBanks
12 October 2006
My mother used to tell us tales of the old days.  This is a few fragments I remember.

Madge.

P.S. Josie, I took heed of your suggestions to split and indent.  Thanks!!

Back in the old days,
   Before the partition,
I had a Lee-Enfield,
   And some ammunition.

Over that field,
   Where the factory now sits,
I’d lie in the grass,
   And take pot-shots at brits.

I well remember,
   A fine summer day,
When we were out cycling,
   Down Skibbereen way.

When there by the road,
   We found a grenade,
Which we safely delivered,
   To the West Cork Brigade.

I remember the barracks,
   Went up like KABOOM!
‘Twas Barney McGrew,
   And Charlie MaCroom.

I later shacked up with,
   The young lad McGrew,
And tried to make sure,
   MacRoom got his share too.

I’ll tell to you some day,
   Of the mayhem and fun,
When Pat McShane lent us
   His big Tommy gun!

Reviews
MY GOODNESS!
Written by Josie (2722 comments posted) 12th October 2006
Goodness gracious Marjorie - You certainly have caught the poetry bug! ha ha. Very good - but don't do like the person in my "insomnia" poem and write all night. I think this poem is funny, and I am sure others will enjoy reading it also.
Slan! t' the Bhoys o' th West Cobh B.
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 12th October 2006
I don't like the silly English formulation of this, a bit of an insult to the Celt. But I am amazed you chose to air an old republican shout. My own dear darling Daddy, God rest his soul, served Collins [ Th' Big Feller] in the South Galway No 2 Brigade of the 'Officials'. Its something I am proud of, right enough; but its not something there is much applause for in this country. Well done for your bravery. As Gerry Adams once said, ' Bang! Bang! Bang!. Its the only language the English understand'. Super stuff. So different from the usual teenage angst and flopsy bunnies. Don't forget poets fuelled a bloody revolution in Ireland. Relevance or what...!!? 
 
Slan!

Written by andybyers (171 comments posted) 7th September 2007
26+6=1 :) 
 
Good grief, you're telling all your Mom's secrets? She must be so scandalized she's put down her harp. :) I was going to make a ribald crack about "partition" but I think I'll leave it at that. :)

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