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This is just word play. I love colors and have been struck by how beautiful many truly ugly things are. I wanted this to sound simplistic, like a child's rhyme, but with diverse images. I am still working on it and, as always, still open to suggestions about how to make it better. COLORPLAY River green, oozing by Spray of leaf, lizard eye Verdant forest, Key Lime pie Green’s the one for me.
Red, red, bloody rag Drunkard’s nose, night-lit fag Crimson rose, stripes of flag Red’s my heart’s true love.
Sun-burst gold, hot delight Ripened wheat, moon by night Daisy’s center, candlelight Yellow warms me up.
Brewing storm in prairie sky Iridescent butterfly Silk of iris, berry pie Purple through and through.
Summer’s sky -- without a flaw Iris and hydrangea Pulsing vein, lobelia Pure and depthless blue
Velvet ribbon, panther’s shine Chinese ink and shaft of mine Winter’s sky and Norway pine Lose yourself in black.
Baby’s tooth and lily spray Bleached-anemic winter’s day Lilacs in the month of May Xerox-paper white.
Sheen of snow, crystal spray Film of ashes, frosty day Silks and satins, shades of grey Grey’s the only way.
Rich deep loam, smell of must Ash to ashes, dust to dust Grows all life, earth’s true crust We’ll all sink in brown.
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