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This is about my journey to find pain relief and imagining visiting a witch as a last resort. I'm not comfortable with this piece so would be grateful for any comments. Journey'd far, expected long, listen to heart. Give all for vial, receive nothing but fear. Pain filled day, follows pain streaked night, Red night sky, reveals shedded blood. Orange moon follows suit and colours the stars, Pain filled day, follows pain streaked night. Green glass eye adds to our mix, unhelpful pill, Still pain follows pain, follows day, follows night. Dash of lilac flame cools our trial, Pain filled day follows night. Cream to texture solidify, Day follows night, follows day, follows night. Thanks to Earth, Air, Water, Flame, and Compass That day follows night, follows day. Expected long, worked hard for love, At end alone, follows pain, follows...
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