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I don't care.
By bloodange77
14 October 2006
Just a little riddle for those that know what this means. hehehehe good for you. For those of you who don't neither do i.

If I had a dream;
I think I might tell you.
But since I don't;
I won't tell you.
Even if I did have one;
Why would you deserve to know?
I don't trust you;
You don't trust me.
I don't care;
And neither do you.

If I had a wish;
I would tell no one.
So since I don't;
I don't have to worry.
If you knew;
I would have to kill you.
Kidding;
but I might... nevermind.
You don't care;
And neiter do I.

If I had to tell;
Someone how I feel.
I wouldn't tell you;
Not even if my life depended on it.
You don't deserve;
That kind of luxeury.
You don't even want to;
Even if I offered you wouldn't.
Since I don't care;
And neither do you.

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Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 14th October 2006
Got it, but not entirely sure about it. Liked the pattern of this but struggled to put it into a context to give full meaning to the words. 
 
All the best, 
 
Phil.

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