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The ambassador
By Fledermaus
15 October 2006
Abul was an ambassador. I imagine the meals for the diplomat must have cost a fortune, for he must have eaten more than any other diplomat in the Empire. Yet he was a well liked guest at the Imperial court, and an important one as well. For who else could claim to have served two of the greatest kings that ever lived?
Abul was a living symbol of peace between Christianity and Islam. He was the link between two legendary emperors. And wherever he came, crowds gathered to see him, for he was impressive and exotic.

He had come all the way from Baghdad to serve the magnificent king of the Franks. By foot and by ship had he reached the emperor's court, where he was welcomed. And he was beloved by the great king, who even wanted him to join his war in the north. The ambassador must have impressed the Vikings, I'm very sure.

In 810 AD Abul died of pneumonia, and the world lost a huge diplomat. The elephant which Harun al Rashid had given to Charlemagne had gone to a better place.

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Hi Batty
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 15th October 2006
That is brilliant. Isn't it amazing what can be done in just two lines. 
 
PS Siddie reckons that he would have lived longer had he worn socks. 
 
Brian
Hi fledermaus
Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 21st October 2006
This was really 'cute' (forgive the awful word!) in a good way. I loved the twist in the end (although my bad habit of reading the end before the beginning spoilt it for me somewhat!) As Brian says, it's amazing how much can be said I such a small space. Nice, quirky piece. 
 
Elli

Written by Fledermaus (3448 comments posted) 23rd October 2006
Thanks Brian and Elli.

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