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| Defeat | |
| By rilLie | ||||||||||||
| 16 October 2006 | ||||||||||||
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for a change, this was written during filipino class. :) many thanks to LuiNahtzi for reading this through during ssp Lead pulling at my heart, No chance of such redemption. No smile, no fresh start, No joy, hope, just desperation. A happiness you slew would it ever return? My very soul pierced through, by your words, your heart of stone. One fatal mistake and I was deserted A lonely babe in a field The very core of my all destroyed by a deadly dagger pierced. My mourning won't finish, Forever more undone. These rivers of tears soul and sorrow one.
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