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Playing With Fire
By rilLie
17 October 2006
Did this during departure time while I was waiting for my big sister to get released (for a dramatic term) from her classroom. she's in highschool and they have a later departure time. I had to wait for her since she broke her foot and my mum assigned me the task of carrying her stuff. That, plust the fact that I've been under LSS on "Unfaithful" by Rihanna, and "Strong Enough" by Stacie Orrico for the past week made me write so much angst. anyway.. enjoy!

But now when I look back

the mistakes I repeatedly made

my reckless heart had made my sorrow

Into my own death I have lain.


I was playing with fire

when with him I scampered off.

Hearts broken all the time

in this silly game of love.

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