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Poetry
Illumination
By Jay
19 October 2006
Open for interpretation....

Pull back dark navy curtains
And let the light stream in.
The darkened room illuminates, all
Shadows are now banished from within.

Comfy chairs invite you to stay
A while (though the Mish mash of colour
Offends the eye) blue green, pink and oak
All run together, each vies against another.

It matters not when all's said
And done - come in, come in,
Won't you take a seat? One day
I know all will match, for now though,

I invite you in.

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Written by Phil (6738 comments posted) 19th October 2006
Interpretation: I've read this four times now and had a different ideas. Each reading suggests a different metaphor. Think I'll come back to this. 
 
All the best, 
 
Phil.

Written by sallyj (5 comments posted) 20th October 2006
I'm not sure what this is saying, but I think there are some thoughts that could be developed such as what why there is a mismatch of bodily comfort and visual discomfort. Also what will precipitate the change 'one day' 
 
Sallyj

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