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| The Ones that Came Before | |
| By Witzl | ||||||||
| 21 October 2006 | ||||||||
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If you ever try to work out your family tree, prepare to be amazed. You start out with your four grandparents, then your eight great-grandparents and your great-greats -- and pretty soon you see that we are all backed by a cast of thousands. We don't even know these people and yet, if even one hadn't been in his or her place along the chain, we would not be here. This was written with an American audience in mind, but genealogy is amazing no matter where you are from. (One minor point: I used 'who' instead of 'whom' in the last stanza. I know the rule, but 'whom' sounded pompous here.) THE ONES THAT CAME BEFORE
A legion came before us, that and more First two, then four, then double that and soon The numbers swell till we can hardly count Those faceless thousands that gave rise to us
And whether on foul ships, heartsick and tired Or banished from their native lands in chains Or ventured here across the frozen wastes All joined now in our tapestry of life
We still see fleeting traces of the ones Whose bodies lie beneath us and whose bones Enrich the soil we walk on and whose songs Died in the woods and rivers, but live on
Their faces are reflected even still Their voices ring in laughter, waft in sighs The paths their toughened feet have beaten out Lie somewhere even still beneath the dust
Our cities rise and sparkle, boom and clang And factories churn out busy-ness and sound We travel now through mazes, furious In tangles ever circling, never still
Where in that chain, then, how far back are we? That far-flung human chain of ancestry Who will we nourish, who will we inspire? What will we leave them, where will our trails lead?
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