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| By Witzl | ||||||||||
| 23 October 2006 | ||||||||||
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M I N D
Day’s over now and duty’s done You’ve done your bit – it’s time to wind right down Just close off, blink out, snuff that tiny flame and let me dive off into sweet oblivion.
But you and I are joined for now and you won’t turn me loose. You race And pull me pell-mell here and there, though I would rather sink into that depthless void of mindless rest so maddeningly not to be with these dark shows that you parade in endless streams before my eyes closed tight, but locking you right in.
What can I do to make you let me go so I can sink or swim into that velvet night and just for once forget this mess, this world that’s mine, for better or for worse?
(Just once to think that peace and goodwill too might come to all.)
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