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Poetry
Sean
By Talisker
25 October 2006
He's my twin.


Recall dear Sean the photograph,
In monochrome that made us laugh?
There’s me and you in twin pushchair,
Me, sound asleep with scarce a care.
You all alert, with impish grin,
Betraying nothing from within.
And placed between our toddler laps,
A monkey in a suit and cap.

Remember Sean the halcyon days,
Those spent absorbed in carpet play.
With plastic soldiers massed in ranks,
Felled by matchstick-firing tanks.
Me with random, scattered fire,
You with aspirations higher.
Of course dear Sean, you always won,
But twin, I found the losing fun.

And then the heady college daze,
You’d win the girls' hearts with ease.
“I met him on the tube”, you’d claim,
Then “Fallopian”, just to explain.
Our twinship is as strong today,
Though scarce the day we spend in play.
Cherished memories rest within,
My other half, my Sean, my twin.

Oli (25/10/06)

Reviews

Written by rilLie (324 comments posted) 25th October 2006
sweet...

Written by Phil (6388 comments posted) 25th October 2006
Humour, nostalgia, love and humanity shine through in this Oli. 
 
For me - wonderful. 
 
All the best, 
 
Phil.

Written by LynB (433 comments posted) 25th October 2006
I think Phil has said it all, really! 
 
You know how much I love your work, Oli - this is no exception. :)
Moving...
Written by JourneyAtNight (301 comments posted) 25th October 2006
..and again, I can only repeat what Phil said! 
 
Simply marvellous. 
 
Take Care 
 
E :)

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 26th October 2006
Very nostalgic, good day at the office Oli :) (as usual!) 
 
Elli

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