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| By morley | ||||||||||
| 25 October 2006 | ||||||||||
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usual story for a first poem ever, i was 14/15 when i wrote this. just had what i thought back then was a "hard break up" and this just sort of flowed out. The first line was something she said to me when we broke up, so i figured they'd be a good starting point. as i've said in my profile, i write lyrics more than poems so it flows kind of like a song would. lend me your tears, i need to cry destroy all my fears, don't let me lie dream me some wings, help me to fly just one small thing, i don't want you to die hate me for trying, tell me to leave i'm still not crying so do as you please deny me existance, pretend i'm not true you'll meet no resistence when i'm not with you my tears still aren't flowing, i'm still in that place the world has stopped glowing, i've fallen from grace away from this nightmare i'll wait in despair, creating a dream in which you care here in the darkness i'll wait all alone creating a heaven for you to call home in my mind there are places no-one has seen places i don't know, places you've been things lurk in that dark which inhabits my mind amongst all those thoughts that no-one will find and i'll never show it, i won't let you see i'll never forget you, but please forget me
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