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| Trick or Treat 4 | |
| By BrianRobertNeal | ||||||||||||||||||
| 28 October 2006 | ||||||||||||||||||
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I've started so I'll finish. Trick or Treat-4. PC2-Excuse me sir, is the DS still in the interview room? Super-Who, oh you mean Wizz Kid, the Bramshill Flier. PC2-Yes Sir. Super-What do you want him for. PC2-Elkington couldn’t have done any of them sir, we turned his place over and found an accounts book. For over 20 years he’s done a Halloween Show at the Kiddies home. He would do two shows, one for the little ones in the afternoon, and one for the older children and staff in the Evening. It’s all in a ring binder. Super-Well done Constable, could you bring it down to Interview Room B. The Super re-entered the Interview Room. Super, “Well Mr.Elkington, have you finished your statement? WK- He’s been very helpful sir. Super- I’m sure he has. PC2 knocked, entered handed the Super the Ring Binder. Then went out. Super-Do you recognise this, Mr Elkington. HE-It’s my accounts. Super-Which proves you could not have committed the Murders. HE-It would have been difficult. Super-Why, have you done all this? HE-You dragged me out of an engagement, threw me into a Police Van, dragged me handcuffed into this Police Station. Super-How do you and Riddles know each other? HE-We’re brothers, as children we abducted and killed a toddler. In time we were released with new identities. I was never punished enough. The child’s face haunts me, I’ve tried to blot it out, I’ve tried to make thousands of little faces smile, make lots of happy mums to try to forget the one mum who’ll rarely be happy again. But Oliver, he’s the eldest, he had no sense of guilt. He’d say “we were young, didn’t know what we were doing”. When mum had her heart attack, Oliver said he was going to kill, one a year till he got caught. I suggested that he would be; as they say on the Telly, “A prime suspect” But not me, Cheerful Charlie Harry Ellington”, look in those accounts and there’s a payment for £5k. So he got himself locked up and I took his money. That’s why I can’t tell you where the two missing bodies are, cos I don’t know. I thought that my getting him locked up had saved many lives, the money, I always give to a “Victims’” Support Group. We’re both nutters, we need locking up. Super-Go on sod off, we’ll make an apology to the media. HE-No lock the pair of us up, Riddles will kill again. Super-Go. WK-One thing Mr.Elkington how did you know there were nine killings. HE-That was easy, there’s a Web-site, it’s patched onto the official ones so I just did a search and as long as I could give a name and place, Riddles would pay up. Mind I had to increase the radius of my search to 60 miles. The rest I got from the local press. Good day gentleman. And he went to collect his belongings and change back into his comic Tramp Outfit. Harry waited till Oliver was released, and they walked off together. HE-We’ve got away with it, they’ve no evidence, they think you’re a raving nutter and I’m a harmless eccentric. Let’s go down the Park were we killed that kid eh. . Riddles-“You’re not getting your £5k” They walked silently to the park, people noticed them, you could hardly miss them, one of them being dressed as a comic Tramp. They went back to the exact spot where the toddler was murdered. HE-Now Oliver, you stand were the toddler was, I’ll say like you did, “Can you see the fishes?”. Now you lean forward like he did. Then I’ll jump onto you like this, push you in, and hold you under till you drown. Just like you did to the kid. Harry weighed 16st and Oliver a mere 9st. It was over in a flash. Still taking no chances he held him face down for a good five minutes. Harry got out of the water, and phoned the Police. HE-I want to admit to killing Oliver Riddles, I’m stood in Stanley Park, by the Boating lake’s Boat House, his bodies in the water.
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