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Because of You
By rilLie
28 October 2006
ohkie.. the title is pretty cliche.. but.. i decided it was best. it's a prayer i've made just a while ago.. we're just done with the intrams and i am aching all over... luckily, my fingers are fine enough to type this... enjoy!

My feet shall run because of you, Lord.

My hands shall move because of you.

My eyes shall see because of you.

My heart shall beat because of you.

and I shall love because of you.

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Lovely
Written by Josie (2844 comments posted) 28th October 2006
RiLie - this is so simple and so beautiful. You are so right. I owe it to God that I can move my left hand - and there is no other way to explain it, but it is a long story. In a nutshell it was a miraculous healing at our church. But there are many other people who owe so much to God too. Well done!

Written by rilLie (328 comments posted) 28th October 2006
thanks, Josie!
Perfect!
Written by Nance (86 comments posted) 29th October 2006
The poem is truly beautiful.

Written by rilLie (328 comments posted) 29th October 2006
thanks for the review!

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