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IF ONLY...
By JohnnyD
31 October 2006
If only... but???


IF ONLY…
 

If only…

Every desire is fulfilled

How wonderful life would be?

 

If only…

Life is wonderful

How beautiful living would be?

 

If only…

Living is beautiful

How ecstatic the world would be?

 

If only…

The world is ecstatic

How content every human would be?

 

Alas!

For every if only

There is always but…

 

Desires unfulfilled

Life not so wonderful

Living unimaginable

The unhappy world

Discontent humans

 

If only…

But???

 

Johnny D
24th October 2006
 

 

 

 


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If only - - - -
Written by Josie (2844 comments posted) 31st October 2006
I always think if only - - - - everyone could just show others kindness and love in life - - - - - but - - the sad thing is that they don't. I am a Christian and Jesus told us to love our neighbour as ourself - - - - but, we don't. I'm not sure that if every desire was fulfilled people would necessarily be happy. Most people would desire to win the lottery, and it has been proved many times that money doesn't bring happiness.

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