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Fear is like a prison.
By tartqueen
31 October 2006
I was thinking about being afraid and how it holds us all back and this poem was the result.  Apologies for the shortness but i don't really write long poems.

Fear is like a prison,
It chains us all.
The tide of life is lapping at your feet.
Dive in.

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Written by Josie (2825 comments posted) 10th January 2008
Your poem is indeed short, but it says a lot in a few lines. Excellent. I feel that your poems leaves a lot to be thought about - especially by me.

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