|
By tartqueen
|
|
31 October 2006 |
I was thinking about being afraid and how it holds us all back and this poem was the result. Apologies for the shortness but i don't really write long poems. Fear is like a prison, It chains us all. The tide of life is lapping at your feet. Dive in. |
Written by Josie (2825 comments posted) 10th January 2008 | | Your poem is indeed short, but it says a lot in a few lines. Excellent. I feel that your poems leaves a lot to be thought about - especially by me. |
Only registered users can rate and write comments. Please login or register. Powered by AkoComment 2.0! |