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Brief Ponderance
By Tenchi
02 November 2006
I started a Bi-Annual tidy of my house today (going to take a week!) Whilst clearing the top of my wardrobe I discovered a stack of paper.

This was someting I wrote a couple of years ago. As always if anyone enjoys it I'm glad.

In whose arms do you cry in?
Is their embrace as sweet as mine?
In whose bed do you stir at this moment?
Is their caress as gentle as mine own; content?
As it was when I had thine?

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Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 2nd November 2006
Liked this one, but unsure about the last line and a bit.  
 
Rhyme before meaning, or me being thick? 
 
Phil.

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