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| Plough Your Own Furrow | |
| By twriter | ||||||
| 28 May 2005 | ||||||
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This is a first draft of a poem, that I have just knocked off, for those young people who have, like a lot of people in my area, just finished their Work Experience. Any advice about this piece would be wonderful, before it is published locally. Plough Your Own Furrow
In times gone by your average little boy would want to be an engine driver playing with his toy, But now he plays at football, he runs with both his feet and the girl who once made dresses works as a high powered manager and holds confrences in Crete.
Never was it more apparent than in the world of work how things have turned quite upside down, We must give ourselves a jerk. For now we must fight harder to be noticed, to be heard, as no longer can we just survive on the good old printed word.
So as we leave our homes behind and take our premiere steps, As we go off to work with actors, shop assistants, engineers or travel reps. We see this is the future - a taste of things to come. some of us find grey clouds and some of us find sun.
So now we've had our taster and know what we might achieve. We have our role models, "Oh, we could be like Steve!" So now we'll back to our lives with an idea of what's around but we know we won't get anywhere if we don't make a sound.
In this life it is quite true that people don't do things for you, You have to do them for yourself ‘til, in the end, achieve your wealth. This can be anything, Not just jeans or the jewels of Kings It can be whatever you want, Just be happy with what you've got.
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