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| Freedom On The True Scale | |
| By shakermaker | ||||||||||
| 04 November 2006 | ||||||||||
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A piece from when I was 17...Again it's not good, again I feel something as I read it... In the meantime, they hold on to their so called freedom Eventually they get lost in time: Friends leave, and still the same faces appear when you'd rather they didn't. One after another they pass through the eye of the storm Struggling for victory against the overwhelming odds They grow old and the youth dismiss them Brave faces of elderly men, with hints of the boy within, look back at what might have been Laughing off the errors, but still feeling the pain. Yet the battle continues, and time is spent trying to hold their head high Working out ways to teach the old dog in them, new tricks. In vain. In the meantime they hold on to their so called freedom.
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