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| A body | |
| By no1butClo | ||||||||
| 06 November 2006 | ||||||||
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I had an idea for a piece of video art [think I was on the train at the time] and this was the result - I'm no artist. I think it loses momentum in the middle, could do with some clearing up? A body, Wrapped in ropes wrapped in the seeds and burrs, the desperate dregs of a distant summer Strung twixt trees, just inches above masses of dead leaves still but seething with detritous life. A funny contradiction. The trees, Wrenched and coiled and twisted with age. Leaning to somewhere, reaching for something they wanted, once. The sun is gone. Ivy was stealthy, crept round the roots and trailed past a trunk...wondering... then she got bored, shot up their bark twirling her way through the gnarlings and gaps. The hosts grew forlorn and surrendered. Seems impossible; the work of such delicate fingertips - two skeletons, stripped. They gave up fighting along with the ghost. And beneath the rags of these forgotten soldiers flesh stirs, sleeping perhaps, but they guard in vain. 'Tis the insects that creep and eat up the deadening flesh as it crawls twixt the ropes that wrap it, wrapped in seeds, and is greedily met by other mouths to feed.
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