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UN, DEUX, TROIS
By JohnnyD
06 November 2006
Le poesie pour les enfants!

UN, DEUX, TROIS

 
UN, DEUX, TROIS

JE VOUS DEMANDE QUOI?

QUATRE, CINQ, SIX

EST-CE QUE VOUS ETES TRISTE?

SEPT, HUIT, NEUF

REGARDEZ LE BOEUF

DIX, ONZE, DOUZE

COMMENT IL SE DOUCHE?

TREIZE, QUATORZE, QUINZE

FAITES PAS DE GRIMACES

SEIZE, DIX-SEPT, DIX-HUIT

JE VOUS EMBRASSE NUIT

DIX-NEUF, VINGT, VINGT ET UN

DEVENEZ UN BON GARCON

VINGT-DEUX, VINGT-TROIS, VINGT-QUATRE

PERMETTEZ-MOI D’ECRIRE UNE LETTRE

VINGT-CINQ, VINGT-SIX, VINGT-SEPT

BUVEZ DU LAIT D’UN SEUL TRAIT

VINGT-HUIT, VINGT-NEUF, TRENTE

SI, NON! AYEZ UN PEU D’HONTE!

 
Johnny D
28th Fev 1994

 

Reviews
TRENTE ET UN
Written by Talisker (1326 comments posted) 6th November 2006
LAVVY PAN! 
 
OLI :x :x :x
Non sono securo!
Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 6th November 2006
Grazie per queste poesie, ma non sono securo se ho capito tutto. Specialmente non ha capito il primo commento sotto.

Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 7th November 2006
.... ?

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 7th November 2006
Regardez le boeuf? Felt that was reaching for the rhyme at the expense of the poem. Interesting attempt but it missed the mark a bit in places for me.  
 
Elli
Confused, Saffron Walden.
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 7th November 2006
Dear me. My Dutch has got so rusty these days. Forgive me but, Is there a 'y' in shite? [shyte!?] 
 
Confused. Saffron Walden. 
 
Also confused, Glasgow-sur-mer
Written by coosh (868 comments posted) 8th November 2006
At the risk of putting the "chat" amongst the "peejons": 
i) "La" poesie... 
ii) Elli, apart of a couple of areas, where do you feel it actually rhymed in any way? 
ii) Josie: no, you are not a "screw-cap" for a whisky bottle. And I assume you are feminine - "sicura".. bella. 
 
 
Ooooooo!
Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 10th November 2006
Grazie mille: Si,la poesia (with an "a" at the end) for one poem. Che una lingua difficile!!! Si, sono una donna, naturalmente. Coosh: Ho bisogno di un buon insegnante per aiutarmi con il mio italiano. (As you can see). Enough of this - please write in English next time Johnny! ha ha

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