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| Dali Days | |
| By gutterkitty | ||||||||||||||||
| 06 November 2006 | ||||||||||||||||
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My relationship recently became long-distance and this is a bit of moan at that fact. I used a bit of licence with the mention of Dali, but I felt I had to work him in somehow.
Time elongates itself between visits,
stretches days to a transparent film which winter-bright light permeates. The numbers on the clock grow thin and anorexic with want. They slice my days with their skeletal shapes, but refuse to eat from the plates I layer with winter-bright hours. I pile them high like cakes, dusted with the things I do to pass the time. But these numerals’ lips are tight slits in these inbetween days. Dry tongues tick inside hollow mouths.
Then he’s here and time snaps back
like an elastic band. I taste its ricochet burn across the days. The numbers step forth from the clock, mouths wide. They eat my days, smacking their lips. Soon they are fat and black like the stamp of a day-to-day calendar. I watch as the hours are ripped away from its pad and caught on the wind like anaemic leaves.
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