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| Pursuit of Beauty (2) | |
| By ellipinnock | ||||||||||||
| 07 November 2006 | ||||||||||||
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2nd draft with the two extra verses-I hope this has become a little less cryptic than the previous draft... Hollow rattling bones spiral round and round scattered, draping over loose, tumbling scree Drilling deeper down into hallowed ground. Twisting confusion, temptations abound in this game of chance, a grotesque parody. Hollow rattling bones spiral round and round. Pale fingers clutch at scraps, weeks old now, found discarded, guilty pleasures taken secretly. Drilling deeper down into hallowed ground. Taut skin slowly creaking and warping, bound over grey tortured frames that wait to flee, hollow rattling bones spiral round and round. Random faces, distant voices sound around an empty, lifeless tragedy, drilling deeper down into hallowed ground. Where once was beauty now lies a half-drowned effigy, silent still in apathy. Hollow, rattling bones spiral round and round, drilling deeper down into hallowed ground.
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