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Sweet Elli
By Talisker
07 November 2006
For the object of my affections ElliP.

Sweet Elli, come away with me,
Together we were meant to be,
Your love alone can set me free,
From broken heart.
I yearn to lie in your embrace,
To wake and see your sleeping face,
Ne’er more to part.
 

Sweet Elli, say you feel it too,
A love so deep, so pure, so true,
Try as we might, we can’t subdue,
This yearning.
Surrender Elli, waver not,
Love pie’s best eaten while it’s hot,
Believe me babe, this one I’ve got,
Is burning!
 

Oli (07/11/06)

Reviews

Written by JourneyAtNight (314 comments posted) 7th November 2006
Ha ha! :grin  
 
Not a mocking laugh, more of a "you'll never cease to astound me with your forwardness" type laugh. 
 
Very nice. 
 
J.A.N 
 

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 7th November 2006
'Would you like some ice with that me dear?' 
 
I think anyone waking to see my sleeping face would get a nasty shock! Still, if it keeps you off the booze :) 
 
First time anyone has written a poem for me (she says, blushing), very lovely (hoping the BF isn't reading over me shoulder :roll
 
Bless ya, flattery will take you far! 
 
Elli

Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 7th November 2006
Enjoyed this one Oli. 
 
All the best, 
 
Phil.

Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 8th November 2006
:grin so cute!!! haha 
 
enjoyed this one a lot. 
 
and to Elli, I do hope your BF isn't reading!! haha! 
 
-rilLie

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