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| By Tenchi | ||||||
| 08 November 2006 | ||||||
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It never ceases to amaze me how whenever I sit down to try and write the lyrics to a song no matter at what age whether 20 > 30 it always comes out like a 14 year olds written it! Although saying that I quite like this. Took about 5 minutes to write and it fits in with a Bluesey/Paolo Nutini type of tune that's echoing around my head at the moment. I haven't written the bridge or the chorus yet but when I do I'll amend it. I don’t sleep so well these nights I can’t sleep without a fight And it’s a fight which I am losing Cause you left without my choosing I don’t get to sleep till dawn Wake up late and meet with scorn For my boss just wants me fired Doesn’t care that I’m so tired I close my eyes I see your smile And though it’s been quite a while I still suffer from the heart It’s killing me that we’re apart I lie awake till I pass out My love for you has come to nowt Shame my boss is such a jerk I really need some time off work I can’t get over the first shock Can’t reset my body clock I can’t laugh and mean it true Cause I just can’t stop missing you And the nights they are the worst I remember well our first thirst When we couldn’t keep away I miss you more each single day My sun rises in your sky Now so dark I wanna cry Can’t stop these feelings deep inside That hurt so much now love has died I need to feel you in my arms Shelter you from all life’s harms I need to touch you with my lips Feel you press against my hips Never thought we’d be alone Thought our love would be our home Never thought that you would leave Trusted you, now I’m deceived If you don’t come back I’ll cope But I’ll live my life with hope That one day you’ll know just what you did Threw away your winning bid
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