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Keep the Sand in the Sandpit Sam
By umbugjug
31 May 2005
This came off the cuff yesterday when our four year old was flicking sand about. Bit of a tongue twister.    

Keep the sand
         In the sandpit Sam.

There's a troll underneath 
         Eating ham and jam.

If you get sand
         In his sandwich Sam.

You'll be jammed in the sand,
        In the sandpit Sam.

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lol!
Written by twriter (117 comments posted) 31st May 2005
That's all really! 
 
Cheers, 
 
TW
Cute and funny
Written by Ostara (61 comments posted) 1st June 2005
And a lovely mental picture too!
mileage in this
Written by kevinrobson73 (371 comments posted) 10th June 2005
charming 
perhaps a nother couple of this

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